Wednesday, 6 April 2016

Max's Poem

Eeling 
Fishing rod with a fork 
Beef meat for bait 
Deep river with big trees and cut down trees 
Muddy banks slippery and a bit wet and the water was deep
I caught a long eel, dark grey on top and white underneath.
The eel wriggled and it was hard to cut the hook out of his mouth.
The knife was shiney sharp and little. 
The eel's

1 comment:

  1. hi max I am jonathon from yaldhurst school I like your poem in the oders

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