On the First sunday Nana mum and i went to picton and got mcdonalds for breakfast before we went on the ferry.
Next i had a coloring in contest i lost but i said i will win next time it was fun and cool!!!!!!!.
Then we got off the ferry and we to deny work. It was a long time until we arrived there, it was cool i sleep and then i woke up wean i got there.
Finally my step sister came to my step dads house i play minecraft and roblox the obby was hard i did a lot of times then i had to go to bed that is the worst thing i was bored i woke up and left out of bed and play minecraft and roblox it was fun and we win the roblox obby. Then i did a lot then i win the obby.
The end! By Zariah.
hay zariah its naiema you sister,
ReplyDeletei really enjoyed you story about when you went to picton
the best thing here is even tho you lost you still had a good attitude
maby next time you could tell me more about you time playing mindcraft and what you bilt but evey thing alse is amazing keep up the good work
naiema
hay zariah its naiema from room six
ReplyDeletei really enjoyed your story and how you keept a good attatude even when you lost maby next time you could temm em what you bilt on mindcraft
thanks naiema
i like it haw i got more detail
ReplyDeleteHi Zariah,
ReplyDeleteMikaela here from Room 6. I like the way you explained what you did on Sunday by getting MacDonalds for breakfast. Maybe next time you could just make sure your sentences make sense.