Last monday and tuesday i went to queenstown with my mum, a baby called hayley and hayleys mum. We were going there for a holiday.
First We were to go on a gondola we had to go in a queenstown bus for seven hours. We had lunch at a cafe my lunch was a mince pie. The mince pie was delicious when i eaten it.
Next i finally arrived at queenstown. i had to walk all the way to the hotel when i arrived to the hotel i had to have a shower. after i had a shower i put a dress on it was pretty after that i played with baby hayley. After i played with hayley i went in a taxi because i was going to a gondola with me and my mum. When i got off the gondola me and my mum was looking where we eat my dinner. When my mum can not find the dinner place. we went back in the gondola because my mum thought that it was down the gondola but it was not. so we had to go in the gondola again because it was up the gondola. when we were there we had to wait a little bit because we wait to get are food it was yummy after i had dinner i played a little bit with baby hayley after that i played with baby hayley i had to sleep because it was night.
Last When it was the morning i had a bath and a shower the shower was near the bath. After that i went to mcdonalds at queenstown for breakfast after i had breakfast i went to a store we got a gray gasket in side my dad's gasket it was dark green for my dad i used it because i need it went i went in a bout it was a small bout when i went in the bout i got a little bit wet but lakey i had my dad gasket to cover me it was warm i felt cosey. Then i went fall asleep when i woke up the bout end. When we went to the hotel i went in a tazi.
By Keysha
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ReplyDeleteHi Keysha!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way on how you putted your story into paragraphs. I could tell that you enjoyed eating your meals when you used the adjective 'delicious'. Maybe next time you could change your i's into a capital letter: I. Overall, amazing story!